Hello, sorry I only speak English.
I've loved your song 1/6 for over 2 years.
I just saw the English demo version, and as a fluent English speaker I'd suggest reworking the lyrics.
This is my idea:
1/6 -out of the gravity-
Looking for you everywhere and losing my way
Searching through the night, up and down every street
Your voice on the phone and all that you had to say
It got me, so nervous, I don't even know.
I found you and your eyes told me that you were crying
Such an obvious lie; nothing happened, and you're okay?
I can't let you fall deeper into negative feelings, alone in the dark
One day I'll break the chain of gravity
Releasing and guiding the space satellite, oh
Surrounded by bright starlight, weight compared to the world will be
If I could lighten and lift away your sadness
I'd want to do nothing more than that throughout the galaxy
Someday I will take you away, far away, to a place
Out of the gravity