The Empty World

今日は! I want to show you my Hatsune Miku English track. I would gladly appreciate any feedback from you.

Lyric:
I dont know how long I've been here
I dont know what place it is
At these endless empty ruins
I've been trying to find someone

From my past I can remember
Many faces, songs and light
I was happy to sing for people
With my best friends all the night

Now all this is gone forever
Only ashes in the sky
This cold empty world is dying
My time is running out too

But anyway I will continue
Searching there for someone
I just want to be heard
In the end of my life